Crystalpaw watched in awe as Lunaleaf began to fight all of the foxes by herself, but her heart nearly stopped when one of the foxes bit into Lunaleaf’s neck, Crystalpaw watched in horror as Lunaleaf fell to the ground. ~Is Lunaleaf…dead? Or is she okay? I really hope she is okay, if she isn’t and is dead, then what will RiverClan do to me if she’s dead?~ Crystalpaw thought with horror while praying to StarClan that she wasn’t dead. Suddenly, Panthergaze and the whole RiverClan patrol behind him burst from the bushes. Panthergaze fought with everything he had left in him, tackling the foxes and pushing them away from Crystalpaw, while Lunaleaf got up and got to Crystalpaw and began to wrap cobwebs around her injured leg. Crystalpaw winced, “Oh, I’m so sorry, Crystalpaw. I didn’t mean to hurt you. I’ll try not to.” And so she did, and this time, Crystalpaw didn’t wince.

I love Warriors but this book wasn’t what I expected I also love wings of fire. It’s the best dragon book series if you’ve never read it go check it out. Also, my favorite cat is probably bramble claw or sandstorm.🐈👑 sadly I can’t have a cat because my parents are allergic.

Rubyclaw’s life Prologue Rubykit was on the hightree with firekit and CloudKit their father icetail was watching them play and said “ get down now!” She slipped and everything went black. Chapter one Rubykit was in the medicine den. she had broken her leg by falling off of the hightree and her brothers became medicine cat apprentices and she was still a kit. She said to Leopardfang the medicine cat and her mother’s sister “ will I recover soon ?” “ I don’t know” said Leopard fang. “Well I’m tired” said rubykit and she fell asleep Chapter two Ten days later “Ruby kit , you have fully recovered from your injuries and it’s finally time for you to become an apprentice” said Cloudstar “finally I get to prove myself!” Rubykit thought “rubykit from now on until you receive your warrior name you will be rubypaw your mentor will be sunnyheart .” The clan cheered with glee for her. She was proud then canineclan sent filled her nose then bonestar said attack! Chapter three Rubypaw was overwhelmed by the dogs in their camp they were going to tear them to shreds! So she lunged at bonestar and bit his throat and he collapsed then claw the deputy said fall back bonestar has lost a life! They ran with their tails between their legs. Cloudstar said rubypaw that was incredibly brave of you today and you didn’t have any training at all I hope you become a warrior soon. Chapter four Three moons later “Rubypaw you have shown great courage tonight you become a warrior !” Cloudstar announced “Rubypaw your name from now on will be rubyclaw of Cloudclan!” Her brothers flametail and cloudeye cheered for her. She felt prouder than ever before! “ tonight you will sit vigil till dawn” she thought then “ I will be the greatest warrior ever known in the history of the clans ! Chapter five Rubyclaw trotted out of the warrior’s den and met with blizzardwisker her mate and laid down and loafed. Her mate gave her a lick on the head. Blizzardwisker said “how are you doing today “ “very nice“ said rubyclaw. Five days later It was a sunny day when rubyclaw went to the medicine den because she felt sick that morning and mintleaf said I am so happy for you you are expecting kits! “W-what said ruby claw “I am expecting kits?” She then said to blizzardwisker “your a father!” Chapter six 7 days later Rubyclaw was walking in starclan’s territory when sunflame her grandmother said “as the rain flows, blood will too find the feathers of Red or the clans will fall.” “B- but what does that mean” “you will find out soon enough my child” chapter seven the clouds were dark as the river. the rains started. rubyclaw saw the river overflow and rushed to her kits to get them to high ground. when she came the water seeped through the nursery and sapphirekit diamondkit, and topazkit were struggling to stay afloat. she and the other queens grabbed them and rushed out onto the cliff but sapphirekit and diamondkit fell and rushed through the rapids rubyclaw left topazkit with snowclaw and swam to her two kits. but it was too late. sapphirekit and diamondkit were dead. rubyclaw wept and wailed "why did you do this to me! they don't deserve to die!"she curled next to thier bodies sobbing. Epilogue Rubyclaw woke up and went to the fresh kill pile and went to a a piece of fresh kill when she heard her kit’s mew “ I’ll be right back sweetie” she said. still filled with grief about sapphirekit and diamondkit. she went back to the nursery to fead topazkit. he mewed I thought you weren’t coming back! I’ll always be there topazkit she had said. she shed a tear. noticing two new stars in the night sky felling the wind as she closed her eyes. Now clan time Beach clan is open for submissions Leader:shellstar 1/1 Deputy river breeze 1/1 Warriors:crabwalk ,echoleap galeleap mudstep, salmon nose fallow tail, 6/20 Apprentices: fishpaw,otterpaw, wavepaw, oak paw.4/6 Kits:sandkit shimmer kit splochkit splashkit 4/6 Queens:trout fin gloryshine misttail 3/3 Elders:driftpelt, frogjump 2/5 Medicine cat:pelicanfeather , flooddrift 2/3 The end sorry if it’s a little short (scroll down to see my oc adoptables ) 🟢=open 🔴=taken 🟣=please give them a home pls im begging you 🟠=Writing contest for them write a fan fic about a cat named Rose whisker who is a queen and her clan is going through a war with snow clan. Cat1🟠mystery cat 5 clues Fur = dark red Eye1=blue Role= queen First letter of name = f Eye2=green Cat2🔴lightwisker Fur: very pale blonde Eyes: amber Powers: no Role: queen How many kits: 5 Mate: you chose Gender : female Cat3🟢 name me ! Fur : Eye or eyes : Kits: Mate: Gender: 🟠 icewisker Fur pale blue Eyes dark blue Gender male -rubyclaw just pls call me just this. not my review nametag Yes mint you can help I ran out of space

Click on the one that’s kinda doing a back flip for free avatar comics In remembrance of The STICK Ok go to free avatar comics to read a STICK STORY and my other story I ran out of space TAKE NOTES RUBYCLAW No take frogleap off I made that what do you mean no one knows who your parents are I can’t tell her the truth thinks frogpaw I know your hiding something from me frogpaw tell me what it is says echopaw. It’s nothing said frogpaw than why did you say noo like that like you were hiding something said echopaw. I’m not hiding anything believe me I said ok says echopaw why do I think she’s going to drag me outside when it’s midnight thought frogpaw? 2 hours later echopaw dragged frogpaw into the forest at night Chapter 6 Echopaw is waiting for frogpaw to tell her. So when you were born there was something called bridclan says frogpaw I don’t believe it, buddy it’s true says frogpaw. Go on the leader and his mate had a kit ok says echopaw. But 2 moons they were dead says frogpaw what happened to the kit says echopaw we took it in that kit was you I don’t believe it says echopaw it’s true says frogpaw soooooo they did something terrible that’s why they had to go says frogpaw paw what did they do so terrible says echopaw they destroyed 10 clans bru yes that’s why there’s only 4 clans left what are the clans name when was called dirt clan ice, clan, dragon, clan, red clan, diamond, clan, gold clan, silver clan, iron clan, alien, clan, and shark clan bru what says echopaw. To be Bru Chapter 7 So what does this have to do with me says echopaw. Ummm that you took down a lot of clans says frogpaw. Who get parents took down clans ten that’s crazy so what happened to the others said echopaw there aren’t any more says frogpaw. What am I supposed to do with this information says echopaw. I don’t know says frogpaw to be continued…….. I will do chapter Chapter 8 Echo, I will come for you at midnight as echopaw was getting her warrior name echopaw I said stop spottedstar said echopaw do you promise to fight for the clan at the cost of your life it could echopaw says I do then may starclan grant grant you your warrior name is echoleap I As Echoleap was about to go on a hunting trip frogpaw came to her today I’m going to get my warrior name! Said frogpaw ok said echoleap ten minutes later frogpaw do you promise to uphold the warrior code I do said frogpaw Then by my warrior ancestors your name will be frogleap frogleap frogleap frogleap frogleap said echoleap. Later that day….. Chapter 10 Yay I. Finally have my warrior name. Yay!!! thought frogleap. Then out of nowhere boom!!!!! The camp exploded in chaos cats were fighting all around frogleap when for a tom scratched his ear a bit down his tail the tom whent running. Clan retreat, said blackstar of river clan. medicine cat Mapleleaf come here the leader lost a life. And the deputy is dead. Oh no we must appoint a new deputy, but who will it be? Later at Hi something it is time to appoint a new deputy said spottedstar the new deputy is ECHOLEAP. To be continued……… special bookkkk As Echostar (not right now it’s still echoleap for now)was walking in the middle of the woods creek creek something or some one was coming to get her she ran and it ran two. dun dun dunnnnnnnnn the end OK guys so sad as frogstar was in the middle of the woods somewhere it was watching him he ran and so did it As bumblestar was in the woods it was watching he said what do you want it started coming towards him he ran flowerstar was walking in the forest she heard a sound it was coming for her as Jaystar was walking in the woods it came for he ran and so did it as dovestar was walking in the forest it came for her she ran and so did it. Chapter 12. The camp exploded into chaos attack bumbleclan that’s not a clan she thought retreat bumbleclan we need a medic medic. We need a medic. We need a medic. I’m here. What happened spottedstar has lost her life. She’s dead. We need a medic. Part 1 Come with me littleclaw said to Echoleap it’s time to get your new name. Fast forward…. I give you a life of a mother said spottedstar may you be as strong as a lion your new name they all said together is…… ECHOSTAR yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy they all said yay Chapter 13 Mmmmm Echostar was singing a song : never gonna give you up never going to make you cry never gonna turn around and desert you Chapter 14 As Echostar walks up to her clan she plays savage in her head : yeah been a will forever be there, but will never be that yeah I’m the hood Mona Lisa breaking in good the pieces had to eggs some cheese and beside my circle like a pizza i’m way too exclusive bones shop on the boutique so the middle clothes only fit my fake booties bad bad wheels talking cash see like what I’m a bullet, relaxing I would never trip honing if I had him that’s my trash you done made so you bad come : i’m a savage:

I’m not saying I don’t like it I’m saying the story was bit hard to follow and short but but it was the effort put into it that counts and I keep seeing the copyright comments I’m trying to wirte a fanfic it blatantly says it a wc fanfic does that avoid things?

Oc adoptables 🔴=taken 🔵=open ask me and i will give u the cat 🔴Berrypaw (berryheart)take by(@ yogurt stinks) Gentle she cat with white chest and one white paw, cream colored pelt and sky blue eyes 🔵FrogLeap Muscular black tom with white underbelly and sleek fur 🔴Fire kit (firelight )taken by (@d7bsh) Tom with flame colored pelt and blue eyes 🔵Redbird Dark red tom with pattern that looks like bird feathers, brown eyes 🔵Duststorm Dark brown she cat with amber eyes and white underbelly with tabby stripes. 🔴SoftMist taken by (@ IM A POTATO) A bluish grey she cat with blue eyes

I think that if you keep working you will get better at this and the haters that have commented on this book are just 5 year olds that don’t really have friends or understand the fact that you might have tried your hardest and that they just need to go outside touch grass and read a real book and not grind on a 50 paragraph essay on how this book might have sucked. Ok but in my opinion this book may have been a bit (very little) bad but keep up that hard work and dedication and determination and keep doing what you love! Oh and for the haters that wanna respond on the message I made I bet you won’t because your little cowards and 5 year olds that don’t know how to read, just make your dirty little message and put this a the bottom, ( I bet you won’t because your too scared) Vine wood Peace out y’all Vine wood — thunder clan We always need a medicine cat

Hi, I’m Skylight of Skyclan! :3 I thought the plot was okay, a little confusing but alright. The grammar though? No, just no, please improve. Writing classes are available in lots of places and you will improve sooo much! The comic was a bit confusing but cute. You said “mewed” and “meowed” a lot, and the all caps were a little disconcerting. Also, there is such a thing as copyright, so please cite Erin Hunter or something, please, you don’t want to get sued. It was really cute overall, though! Can’t wait to see you improve! :3 -Skylight (yes I know this can mean a window but it’s cute, okay?) of Skyclan :3

I didn’t read it but I still wish to tell all of you to stop. I understand that they didn’t give credit or it wasn’t that good, but they weren’t that experienced. Like dude, just give him some grace. You guys talk like you have no respect for him as an actual person. So just for all you haters out there who want to discourage people, you’re only causing more pain to this world. If you’ve ever been a bully and you bullied someone and the next day they killed themselves. You technically a murderer. SO SHUT UP AND JUST SHUT YOUR STUPID RUDE COMMENTS.

Hi it’s me Jasminefur. (the cat that, if I could, I would want to be) I’m only 9 so in my opinion… THIS JACKSON PERSON DID WELL EVEN THOUGH THERE’S GRAMMAR ISSUES!!!! oh and, warrior cats fan 🐈 and Hazelstar of ThunderClan, I agree and also BTW for those who read the legit warriors series I know how TigerStar died he got his throat slashed open by Scourge apparently and lost all 9 lives at once………did you know Ravenpaw and Barley are mates so that makes them………gay? Sry for the random facts just trying to forget the fact someone barfed at recess Ok oc time! (Current)Name: Mint Leaf Clan: CloudClan (Current)Age: 12 moons Family: mom is Nightingale, dad is unknown and littermates is Sunny Heart (Current)Position: medicine cat, mentor Apprentice: Willowpaw (Willowcream) Personality/description: a crème brown she-cat, with scars on her paws (from stepping on some dead animal’s teeth as a med cat apprentice)and sparkling light blue eyes, who likes sunny newleaf days, and dislikes war. She’s shy, and mostly keeps to herself. She is NOT for adoption! Also sorry if I took your name I didn’t read all the comments Chapter order: Prologue: Mosskit’s promise Chapter 1: Scorchfang’s omen Mint Leaf is the medicine cat of CloudClan. Every night, StarClan sends a dream to her saying she has to go to the Mooncave. But she is wounded and can barely even walk. It’s up to her to try and visit the Mooncave before it’s too late… Pls let me know how I did on my oc it’s my first time if u have a comment call me AllieCat may StarClan light your path! P.S. if anyone has a clan called CloudClan I would like Mint Leaf and Sunny Heart to join; Sunny Heart is a warrior and Mint Leaf is a medicine cat (if there is already a medicine cat, i want Mint Leaf to be the medicine cat apprentice, if there is already an apprentice, I want Mint Leaf to be a kit who will be the medicine cat apprentice ~Mintleaf of CloudClan ~ AllieCat